Panikeke.
As Miss Key passed the Panikeke to us while we sat at our table. I could feel the heat coming towards me. It felt hot and steamy and it looked so good. I wanted to take a bite of it. When I got mine I took a medium bite of it and I thought about how to describe it. Panikeke smells delicious,tastes amazing,feels soft inside when I bite into it, it makes me want to eat the whole thing in one bite:( sad face. It really tasted good and delicious. I wish one day i could eat panikeke again on samoan
Language week again, and it makes me wanna eat it now.
Kia Ora Calvary. I loved your descriptions of the panikeke, I noticed that you use your sense to help describe what it was like to eat the panikeke. It even made my stomach grumble! I wonder if next time you could give your sentences a but more structure to let the text flow.
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