Title:
MAKING A BED
What you need:
New bed linens
What to do:
Take off the used linens.
Get new linens.
Put new linens on.
Cover the bed with new sheets.
put on new pillow cases.
Put the bedspread on
Put the pillows on the bed.
Put the blankets on the bed
Kia ora Calvary,
ReplyDeleteWell done with your bed linen instructions. This is a chore I really hate!
I like how you have set out your instructions so it is easy to understand (e.g. adding numbers and a title).
I wonder whether you can put adverbs (words that often end with a ly and describe what the verb is doing) e.g. gently, carefully. By adding adverbs it can give you reader specific instructions e.g. Put the pillows on the bed gently.
Well done!
Looking forward to the next post,
Miss Laxa
FROM MRS A @ NWS
ReplyDeleteIt is Chinese Language Week this week so...
Ni hao (Hello) Calvary
I like how you have presented the instructions on how to make a bed with clean linen. Is there a special way in which to put the sheets on the bed? Do you help with making the bed at home too? My little 4 year old grandson is learning how to make his bed while we have been in Lockdown.
I look forward to reading your next blog Calvary.
Zhanshi zaijian (Bye for now)
From Mrs A
Hey Calvary!
ReplyDeleteI also like the way you have set up your work. It’s quite clear and straight forward I thought. I like the way you added pics too. Visually appealing
Do you think in the beginning you could’ve added a little introduction like, today I will teach you how to make a bed? Maybe?
Happy cleaning!